The Making of a Sequel: All For Him
For those of you on Fanfiction.net, I am ihli over there. Mostly I write Hotch/Reid for Criminal Minds. One of my most popular stories was called Reality TV. I posted an article about writing that story here in this blog.
When the story was over, I got tons of requests for a sequel. I was pleased and stressed. How do you follow up on a story like that. The situation was that two characters were forced to have sex with each other by an unsub. Fortunately, they secretly loved each other.
That situation was completely not repeatable.
I feared any story I did would not live up to Reality TV and the emotions it brought out in people. That didn’t stop me from trying.
I started thinking what would happen next. I ended with the two characters agreeing to have a relationship even though it is against the rules at work. Most stories I have read between Hotch and Reid keep the relationship a secret. I can relate to this, that way we can all pretend it is happening off camera on the show.
Hotch has a son, Jack. Any change in Hotch’s life will impact his son and I started thinking about how Jack might react to this relationship. Since Jack knew Spencer I decided that wouldn’t be an issue. I actually think someone who “knows everything” and can articulate it would be pretty cool to a 5 year old.
But it occurred to me, if Hotch and Reid need to keep their relationship a secret either, Jack can’t know or he had to keep the secret.
Hotch is a single dad, Haley, Jack’s mom is dead. I didn’t think Hotch could have a real relationship that Jack didn’t know anything about.
So now we are asking a five year old to keep a secret. I knew I was getting somewhere. My five year old will tell people anything and everything she knows. So will my eight year old. The concept of secrets doesn’t totally compute. Especially, not this kind, about family.
I imagine that Hotch tried to explain, this was like not telling someone what they were getting for Christmas. That if he told Hotch and Spencer could get in Trouble, with a capital T.
I also imagined that Jack was a relatively sensitive kid like my eight year old. When she gets upset or frightened or frustrated she acts out. Especially when she was five.
That became the premise for All For Him. Jack is acting out because he is uncomfortable with keeping a secret that could get his family in trouble. That’s a lot of pressure for a little kid.
When Hotch learns this, he is completely torn. He loves his job, he loves his son, he loves Spencer. Suddenly he is in a position where it looks like one of those has to change. But which one?
That’s were I deviated from the norm. The obstacle to happiness was “a rule”. Perhaps they could get “permission” to break the rule. I started considering and researching why this kind of rule existed. Ultimately, it was about having a good work place. Would the two men be able to perform their jobs? Would their co-workers be comfortable with the situation?
One of the requests I got was for the sequel to cover how the team was reacting to the relationship. Bingo, I would have them interviewed to see how they felt to determine if the relationship would create a hostile work place.
Finally, Reality TV had a case. I knew I needed a case in this story too. It would serve as a backdrop to show that Hotch and Reid could work together. Cases are probably the hardest part for me to write. I don’t know much about psychology but I love to watch shows about it. It makes it hard for me to write profilers on a case. However, I understand wanting to get good grades. What if I made someone willing to kill for good grades.
I wrote the interviews with the characters as one block. I wrote the case separately as one story. Then I became a quilter, cutting up the pieces and stitching them back together in an order that made sense.
I don’t think the final version had the impact of reality TV. But I do think it was a solid what’s next for these characters and I am pleased with the result.